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By jeff_feezle on 08/17/2010
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hmmm.... 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (8/18/2010 3:40:53 PM)

Though this piece is short in nature its message is quite large. Love comes with all the good things that some times make us fear or even over think or over process of loving. Though I must admit that your first and second stanzas set the mood for more than what the rest delivered. As two different entities the first two stanzas and the last two stand perfectly. Maybe a loop in between them can serve as a needle to saw both together. Overall, your first stanza was simply beautiful. Fast asleep in love with you. Boy who could love me like that? You shook me woman. Lol The second stanza brings about the query of doubts which brings about a sense of slight fear. The last stanza works as a closing very well. I love the power of those affirmations. They have a luring romantic touch I like.


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