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Sunflower
By EmptyBamboo on 09/16/2010
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I loved this but it felt like 


Written by Red Roses and Wine  (9/16/2010 12:24:56 PM)

talking a bite out an apple and not beeing able to keep eating. It left me craving for more. But nonetheless, a great sart.

Thank you Iris! 

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Written by EmptyBamboo  (9/27/2010 7:34:45 AM)

... 't was just an autumn mood :)
Pavel

Sunflower 


Written by MattCard  (10/8/2010 10:32:55 PM)

Nicwe poem for autumn when all the leaves are turning and we are left with only memories.
Yours
Matthew Anish

Thank you Matthew :) 

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Written by EmptyBamboo  (10/21/2010 4:32:59 AM)


 

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Written by Miki  (10/26/2010 8:44:01 PM)

:( aww

Sunflower 

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Written by MattCard  (11/20/2010 11:31:01 PM)

Should be "where has it all gone" I think. Small quibble - it is a very nice poem. Have you ever read Allan Ginsberg's "Sunflower Sutra"? It also talks about that marvelous flower. Hope you have a good time with the woman with the lo-necked breast"
Yours
Matthew Anish

Your comments are valuable! 

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Written by EmptyBamboo  (11/22/2010 5:27:08 AM)

Thank you Matthew,

I decided to accept your suggestion about the last line.
Also revised the first line, too.

Pavel
And I just have read the poem by Allen Ginsberg, thank you for mentioning it.


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