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Let me go
By Miki on 10/26/2010
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Written by EmptyBamboo  (10/26/2010 11:44:03 PM)

These lines flow and sound fine.
I found a sense conflict here in first two lines.
However is makes it sound even more naturally and sincerely.
Pavel


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