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Cut Here
By wickedhart on 02/05/2011
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Hey (: 

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Written by BeccaBeaudwin  (2/5/2011 3:40:24 PM)

Wow...This is flawless...I like the part when you say, "I will drip upon your soul."
Very powerful.

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (2/7/2011 9:24:55 AM)

The mood and tone of this piece is anxious. I can almost feel the speaker’s neediness for that something that can give you the rest of knowing. Need for closure is extrapolated here but also a strong sentiment of longing, wanting and perhaps even loving.

The opening stanza was quite original as you ask to be cut by the dotted lines. I like that imagery very much. Your voice in disambiguation is quite evocative hurt me, notice me, etc…

The alliteration of the third stanza works well as you evoke a desperate want. All in all I enjoyed this piece.

On another note, I would like to remind you that we are now enforcing the rule of two reviews per posted poem. Would you please review two poems in this forum.

Thanks for your contribution and a most excellent read.

Iris Yanette
Moontown Moderator

 

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Written by wickedhart  (2/9/2011 4:25:52 AM)

Thank you both for reading this...it is very much appreciated.

 


Written by jocodi  (3/29/2011 10:58:50 PM)

Wow - this definitely reaches out. Deep. I can feel the darkness. A soul reaching out... Is a bit scary in it's possible implications, or maybe that is just me...Very well written.

 


Written by Loveishard  (4/2/2011 6:56:39 PM)

I like i really do yea sure its a bit scary and depressing but what other way of expressing yourself then by writing it down on paper:) we are just human and everyone has their own individuality :) nice choice of words


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