Your imagery is wonderfully revealed flowing from each in transition allowing the reader to enjoy without being annoyed. Often mixing can weaken the message you intend to send. A pleasureful read expressing love that could be ethereal. Thanks Michael
The first few lines gave this piece a soft air of mystery disguised into soft tender imagery. Your diction and metaphor give this entity a strength and power of overwhelming quality. There is also an extrapolated sense of romance here which I so enjoyed. The mood and the voice are serene though this entity has such power over the speaker. I really enjoy this poem. It was quite a romantic read. I enjoy those so very much.
On another note, I don’t know whether you have already reviewed tow poems prior to posting. But it a customary rule to review two poems before posting. If, you haven’t done so yet, please feel free to comment on any poem in this very forum.
Thanks very much for such enjoyable post and the reviews as well.