The tone of sadness and melancholy from this piece are quite powerful. It is a topic we can all relate to at one time in our lives or another resulting in a evocative sense of sympathy and empathy from the reader. -Which is a good technique because we want the reader to relate to our feelings, understand them or even perceive them from an experiential point of view.
Thanks for posting this piece and for following the rules of review s well. I am looking forward reading more from you. PS. I saved you in my friend’s list as I will be reading more of your work as you post.