The fairytale quality of your imagery is stained by reality but I like it.
I think your stanzas could have been arranged better. This would have given your poem a visual appeal.
Your voice has a sad tone yet romantic almost.
Thanks for posting here at the Love Poetry Forum. I would like to remind you that we are enforcing a rule of two reviews per post and upon doing my usual noon run of the forum I see you haven’t reviewed two poems at this forum yet. Maybe you’re forgot or don’t quite realize we have such rule. Would you kindly review two poems please?
Thanks for your contribution to this site both posting as well as reviewing.