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So Long Bright Eyes
By Ryolite on 02/10/2011
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Written by JdSchooley  (2/14/2011 7:49:47 PM)

I found this complex and drawn out.
The early portion has a repition that feed into a less srtuctured sequence. I was not sure why that was, but felt a little lost with the vast proportions and the volume of emotions here. Actually you may have two or three poem here.
Well think about a little tightening up.....just my 2 cents....Jd


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