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By Ghostwriter on 02/20/2011
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Written by Raisy95  (2/20/2011 6:32:27 PM)

this is really good, great work!


Written by khushi  (2/25/2011 10:11:16 AM)

its an amazing poem...beautifully written wid one of the most sweetest feeling...must say..she is a lucky girl:)


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Written by Ghostwriter  (2/28/2011 7:26:44 AM)

thank you so much for kind words of encouragement, i'm new to moontown and never really put my poems out there before. thanks again :)


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Written by alienrhymer  (3/2/2011 6:57:28 AM)

'shroud me with peace and joy' - what does it mean? I don't think I know.


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Written by Ghostwriter  (3/2/2011 8:57:27 AM)

erm, well there isnt anything cryptic about that line, I thought the meaning was obvious? :S thx though.


Written by anjali  (3/3/2011 4:46:00 AM)

dat was vry nyce...........gr8 work! :)


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Written by Heavensentgina  (8/4/2011 2:41:53 PM)

Love it!


Written by rhythmiccchaoss  (8/15/2011 2:43:32 PM)

Very nicely written. The only suggestion I would make is that perhaps starting the second stanza with simply "If" then you would have the consistent repetition through all the stanzas. Just a suggestion =] great work!!

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