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take my hand and disapear
By santhony718 on 03/01/2011
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Written by Raisy95  (3/1/2011 8:09:00 PM)


Written by JdSchooley  (3/1/2011 8:17:17 PM)

Typos! i = 'I' and this..."sighn" could be sign, but sigh sounds like what you were after. Please insert the punctuation when using the contraction...you have...=...you've.
Nice piece....
I think we want good poetry to show good punctuation too........Jd

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