Written by AWHITAKER (3/25/2011 11:07:23 AM)
I like many lines here....Titanics aren't all that sink.....I find very original and deive....also frozen in December....love it...and the need to see only your eyelids in sleep. Much to admire in your poem.....Didn't they raise the or parts of the Titanic? I hope we get to read about a change of heart maybe depicting this in your life in a future poem? Enjoyed your honest, deive writing.