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Too Early a Goodbye
By Charmed on 04/10/2011
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reminder 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (4/13/2011 10:20:40 AM)

Randomly, I moderate the following forums: Free Love Poems, Free Verse I and free Verse II. I am posting this message ON ALL POSTS as a reminder. We have a rule of two meaningful reviews per post. If one posts a poem in Free Love Verse one must do the two reviews in that forum. Wherever, one posts, one must review.

This message is not directed to one in particular, just a general and friendly reminder. Should you have any questions about the enforcement of this rules please message me.

Thanks for your posts both poems and reviews!

Iris Seda,
Moontown Moderator Burlesque

 


Written by jwh  (4/13/2011 10:03:07 PM)

Charmed, you are obviously a woman with a dedication to words. I admire this poem for a couple of reasons. First it is heartfelt and honest. Second, it must have taken much energy to craft. Some suggestions. I find it too long and I think that length is in part due to some unneeded repetition. It seems to me that there are three sections to this poem, it might help visually to break it into these sections. You've put so much energy into the rhyming elements, however sometimes it appears that your metre is way off (I'm no big expert on this). I wonder what you would write if you tried free verse. Thanks for the poem.

 

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Written by Stephen  (4/15/2011 3:28:34 PM)

your a gifted writer, keep it up.

just dropped a note on your face book 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (4/25/2011 3:13:24 PM)

I guess I already have found you. Welcome to MTC

Iris Yanette
aka
Moontwon_Moderator_Burlesque


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