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why? i dunno!!!!
By khushi on 04/11/2011
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why? I dunno 

Written by DesertBoyIan  (4/11/2011 10:47:01 AM)

I like the idea, but it feels fragmented - like, it goes from one topic to another with no segway. However I do like the 4th stanza very much. It would be better to replace I Dunno with I don't know. Hope this helps you, it is all meant as positive feedback! :-) Peace - Ian


Written by scene97  (4/14/2011 9:32:21 PM)

Wonderful poem..
it was very cute, and yet very deep. I feel that way all the time with insomnia and severe depression. i struggle and dont know why its happening.. keep on writing your amazing!


Written by Robert  (4/18/2011 3:57:04 PM)

I love poems that share common traits amoung all of humankind. you have spoken to us all!

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