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By Stephen on 04/15/2011
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Written by khushi  (4/17/2011 11:34:09 AM)

u surely love her a lot...but werever poem is concerned...focus upon strong expressions n carefully structured images...u could also focus on rhymes....i like d comparisons
thank u:)

this is sweet 

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Written by Moontown_Moderator_Burlesque  (4/18/2011 8:56:03 AM)

This poem is simply sweet and romantic just the way I like this genre.

Just a general reminder 

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Written by Moontown_Moderator_Burlesque  (4/18/2011 8:56:22 AM)

Randomly, I moderate the following forums: Free Love Poems, Free Verse I and free Verse II. I am posting this message ON ALL POSTS as a reminder. We have a rule of two meaningful reviews per post. If one posts a poem in Free Love Verse one must do the two reviews in that forum. Wherever, one posts, one must review.

This message is not directed to one in particular, just a general and friendly reminder. Should you have any questions about the enforcement of this rules please message me.

Thanks for your posts both poems and reviews!

Iris Seda,
Moontown Moderator Burlesque


Written by mgb915  (4/18/2011 12:12:49 PM)

This is a typical love poem, but it conjures up some really interesting images ("a bicycle on/The road of my thoughts," for instance). Maybe you could make the relationship in this poem more dynamic: does she ever tick you off in any way? How does she feel about you?

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