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By Obstinate on 04/21/2011
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Written by Unknown Member  (4/22/2011 11:38:52 PM)

I think the structure is strange that's why I've not given this a five stars.


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Written by Obstinate  (4/23/2011 9:02:12 PM)

supposed to be strange and awkward to read.. its how im feeling


Written by ANU  (8/30/2011 12:09:25 PM)

Nice rhythm and flow


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Written by Mr.Tibbs  (9/6/2011 3:32:12 PM)

I appreciate the attempt to ebing different in the way you're trying structure the poem but the first stanza really should set the tone, somewhat organized then you can go on from there with the abstract agenda you originally set for the poem. But if the first stanza is too complicated to read then either the reader will lose interest or get confused and not no what you're actually trying to say.


Written by Medicmatt2042  (1/20/2012 10:43:56 PM)

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