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By khushi on 04/21/2011
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Written by Unknown Member  (4/22/2011 11:43:19 PM)

This isn't developed enough so it doesn't leave a lasting impression. It's also quite messy. 'i don''t understand why do i miss you,' - this sounds like a question so it should have a question mark. Otherwise remove the 'do.' I've given this piece a three stars because i love the second stanza, really nicely written.

-Jasmine. :)

resolve to let go when it can't be ha? 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (4/26/2011 2:24:12 PM)


 


Written by Princess87  (4/26/2011 4:37:25 PM)

Thank for this poem it makes things clear for me.

 


Written by Ghostwriter  (4/27/2011 9:07:26 AM)

i think this is a lovely example of raw emotion. ok, seemingly childlike in a way, but then isnt that how we have all felt in matters of the heart? lovely poem

 

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Written by ANU  (5/29/2011 2:07:03 PM)

All who have loved and lost can understand what you say here

compliance expected 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (6/3/2011 1:38:55 PM)

This is just a general reminder not directed to anyone in particular but to address all posters alike.

Please remember to be courteous and follow the reviewing rule.

Every poster must review two poems before posting their own. Even unmoderated forums enforce this rule.

Now remember, that you must review in the same forum you post. If you post in free verse you must have done two reviews prior in this very forum.

You can not review in Love Poems or Free Verse II and post in Structured. IT WILL NOT COUNT AS A REVIEW.

Lack of compliance will put your piece at risk of deletion.

Thanks for your proactive involvement on our site.


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