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Weeping Willow
By Jman69 on 05/07/2011
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Written by Cervantes  (8/31/2011 9:50:03 AM)

I like the title and the tenderness. I like the passion of the write. It is a little cliche and you need a metaphor for rose like flower or blossom or bud or something because you use it and it becomes distracting from the beauty of the piece. Try to rework this unless you are of course fine with the ease of it. Just my suggestion.

I love this! 


Written by Medicmatt2042  (1/20/2012 10:46:08 PM)

This really affected me positively. Reading it gave me chills. Great work :-D I definitely related to it!


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