just a reminder
Written by Moontown_Moderator_Burlesque (5/23/2011 1:18:41 PM)
||Good Morning Moontown Members. This is just a random note to remind or inform as the rule of “two meaningful reviews per posting”.
This is a general message, not directed to anyone in particular yet addressed to all of our posters.
Please review two poems before posting your own poem. Now, if you post in free verse, your critique has to be also in this forum. You CANNOT review in Love poem forum and post here, as those reviews will not be applied to your post.
Feedback in critique from our readers is very important as we want to know what our readers perceive from our work. Critique is also an important element for growth as it makes us aware of what needs work and what is already working.
All of the forums moderated or not share this rule. Please be proactive at your reviews.
Thanks Iris Yanette aka Red Roses and Wine
Written by Lovey-dovey (5/25/2011 4:59:38 AM)
||I like the way you deliver your words... it draws readers feelings but just this part... I guess you need to take a look...
Stories of life and happiness,
That has truth by its side.
Carrying strong a hunger for kinship,
And not just looking for a bride.
Is it carrying a stong hunger for kinship or
carrying strong(, a and) hunger for kinship?
Just sharing my thoughts... hope you dont mind it.