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Sad, lonely, angry, confused...
By Miki on 05/15/2011
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Written by karizmaticvoice  (5/21/2011 10:11:57 PM)

Good write, touched home for me, I like it!

general reminder 

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Written by Moontown_Moderator_Burlesque  (5/23/2011 1:13:59 PM)

Good Morning Moontown Members. This is just a random note to remind or inform as the rule of “two meaningful reviews per posting”.

This is a general message, not directed to anyone in particular yet addressed to all of our posters.

Please review two poems before posting your own poem. Now, if you post in free verse, your critique has to be also in this forum. You CANNOT review in Love poem forum and post here, as those reviews will not be applied to your post.

Feedback in critique from our readers is very important as we want to know what our readers perceive from our work. Critique is also an important element for growth as it makes us aware of what needs work and what is already working.

All of the forums moderated or not share this rule. Please be proactive at your reviews.

Thanks Iris Yanette aka Red Roses and Wine

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Written by strongheart  (6/30/2012 2:30:29 PM)

my mind feels depressed
and my body feels used
I want to feel loved
and I need it to.

You finely said "I love you"
and baby you know I do!
But your gonna have to show me
that your feelings are true.

Because baby I feel so alone,
Lying here with you.

see how just a couple of little changes and breaks gives the whole poem an easy to fallow rythem? I really like this poem. :)

 


Written by strongheart  (6/30/2012 2:30:57 PM)



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