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By dasisfranz on 06/02/2011
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Written by mwhousemouse  (6/2/2011 6:04:36 AM)

Welcome to MoonTown,
You have create Rhythm in meter & rhyme.
When read aloud The closing line for me broke away from the established flow.
Perhaps two lines to say what you want to say would add to the strength of the verse & leave the reader better satisfied. Read aloud & see what you think. You may not agree with my thoughts.
Looking forward for more of your posts
Michael

please comply 

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Written by Red Roses and Wine  (6/3/2011 1:37:31 PM)

This is just a general reminder not directed to anyone in particular but to address all posters alike.

Please remember to be courteous and follow the reviewing rule.

Every poster must review two poems before posting their own. Even unmoderated forums enforce this rule.

Now remember, that you must review in the same forum you post. If you post in free verse you must have done two reviews prior in this very forum.

You can not review in Love Poems or Free Verse II and post in Structured. IT WILL NOT COUNT AS A REVIEW.

Lack of compliance will put your piece at risk of deletion.

Thanks for your proactive involvement on our site.


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