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Threaten By Passion
By Stephen on 08/18/2011
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Written by Mr.Tibbs  (9/6/2011 3:48:31 PM)

I was absolutly in love with the poem until the last line and that reason is because in the beginning you used you as yourself in the poem, then went figuratively with passion being personified as a person, but you just jumped right back into you with nothing to lead it in. It's almost as if you were rushing to finish the poem.
I could be wrong and you had a different approach that I missed, but this is just my opinion.

 


Written by Medicmatt2042  (1/20/2012 10:43:26 PM)



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