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By Cervantes on 08/31/2011
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Written by Starr  (8/31/2011 12:02:33 PM)

3rd stanza: 3rd line - i feel like that could be made into two lines, or have a comma separating "in this life" and "in my victories".

The deep hell which those four walls are.

I am liking the weather in this one; much more hopeful.


Written by Medicmatt2042  (1/20/2012 10:45:13 PM)

The structure of this is so absolutely neat! I loved it! Great work!

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