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My one and only
By Stephen on 09/06/2011
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Written by Unknown Member  (9/10/2011 4:36:36 PM)

I kind of adore this poem. The little personal phrases like 'fruity aroma stains', 'her tears will grease my ear', 'lonesome is queen' pull me in and make me question just what kind of feeling would make you say things like that.

The flow is a little stunted, and I stumbled on a couple of lines- like the first one (should night pitch be night pitches? I'm not sure) which is the only reason this doesn't get five stars- but this is still quite wonderful.


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