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Me & You
By daver on 09/13/2011
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me and you 

Written by flanders  (5/31/2012 2:09:02 AM)

good read dave you tell it as it is.
thanks flanders.


Written by Paralda  (6/3/2012 3:06:17 AM)

I have two negatives. But they don't overlap the positive. I guess it's taste, but I don't like that you use Me/You in the start of every line. And second, too short. However, it's a very good poem, can see you've written that at a very sensitive moment in your life so it's genuine. Two thumbs up for sharing.

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