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Love at First Sight
By Beautiful2 on 09/14/2011
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Written by Beautiful2  (9/14/2011 1:04:49 AM)


Written by Cervantes  (9/14/2011 10:08:44 AM)

This is five stars. The opening sucked me in like the pupils and the image is very evocative. But then the rest of the poem does the same thing and doesn't let the reader rest as you drive the message home. Short and strong. I think you left the " s" off exist though.

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