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By thomasbeard11 on 09/22/2011
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Written by Cervantes  (9/23/2011 10:14:37 AM)

I like this piece but I think the questions distract from the overall movement of it. Even with the occasional rhymes it works for me. Very heartfelt write but just a minor spelling error or two here and there like S2 L8 lessoned learn is lesson learned right? Unless you made the error on purpose and if you did I don't know how to feel about it. Anyway those few changes I think would tighten the piece tremendously. So just three stars for now

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