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Blind Lost Loved
By standrkm on 10/01/2011
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Written by Cervantes  (10/4/2011 11:47:34 AM)

I like this piece too. I am just left wondering at the end. It seems to come out of nowhere for me. All the images are very easy to grasp and I enjoyed them in this poem. They paint a sad picture of loss and longing that the reader can feel that is why loved seems out of place to me. It seems more like lost love to me. Maybe I am missing that piece of it and I need to rexamine it. Maybe you can shed some light for me?


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Written by standrkm  (12/16/2011 9:51:38 PM)

Yeah it's about being lost with someone that's also lost and you're content with it. Not a happily every after stereotypical romance at all but together you both kind of fuel eachother and it's all you need at the time. Kind of off and on, hot and cold.
I wish I could tell you more but it was all in my head perfectly and just poured out too fast. I also want it to be mysterious and open.


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Written by kennethcook  (8/31/2013 7:42:23 AM)

Good imagery in this piece. Thanks for sharing.


Written by kennethcook  (8/31/2013 7:42:43 AM)

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