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Letting You In Was Easy, I Don't Know If I Can Let You Out Now. <3
By summerlove1915 on 11/28/2011
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Written by Andydon  (11/30/2011 4:50:11 PM)

LOvely poem thanks for the creativity

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Written by standrkm  (12/9/2011 6:14:30 PM)

Good stuff, I mean I for some reason can't give it five stars but that's just because it has to be perfect which it almost is. It's a great story but maybe needs a little shine here and there and you got gold. It kinda reminds me of a song lyric "loving you was easier than anything I'll ever do again". Keep writing, I sincerely look forward to your stuff.

 

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Written by summerlove1915  (7/11/2012 11:49:56 AM)

Thank you very much for your opinion. I appreciate you not giving it 5 stars, considering it is not perfect. I believe you gave it your most honest opinion and I really hope you read more of my poems and comment on them. Please and thank you. (:

 


Written by Cervantes  (7/11/2012 2:13:18 PM)

I really love the flow in this piece too. You have a simplistic yet complicated flow. It moves and tells a story and captivates me as a reader. I don't feel like you are saying anything overly profound but the simple beauty of the pieces I have read is astounding to me. I like your work. Just polish it and you will have a five. Little minor things are the only problems I see. Like L5 ending in ".." when the following line continues the thought. That just distracted me a little. But it is a lovely piece

 

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Written by summerlove1915  (7/12/2012 12:46:33 PM)

Thanks for pointing that out. I understand that completely. I'm thinking the reason for "..." was probably because I was in thought. Considering what to write next. Ya know? Something kept telling me... It's alright to let my guard down. The "..." was me overanalyzing the fact that it's alright to let my guard down. But, seeing it from someone elses perspective is very helpful. thanks.


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