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Beautiful Girl
By standrkm on 12/07/2011
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beautiful girl 


Written by quill59  (12/7/2011 8:50:25 AM)

lovely poem keep writing

 


Written by Unknown Member  (12/8/2011 8:59:58 AM)

A remarkable piece, you are getting alot better. Keep on writing.

 


Written by Unknown Member  (12/8/2011 9:22:14 AM)

beatiful poem honey
:) reminds me of the saying "every body needs somebody to love"

 

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Written by Unknown Member  (12/22/2011 4:21:48 AM)

You think you are a poet
Time to get over it.

 


Written by MarlaMartian  (12/22/2011 8:09:14 PM)

love the ending :)

 


Written by Mr.Tibbs  (1/10/2012 2:29:38 PM)

Love the theme. Love the fact that you kept up with the rhyme scheme, but fo some reason I feel like the language or dialect itself is elementary. I understand the poem completley, like what it's trying to say about a beautiful girl, but there just isn't enough to make me say "Hmmm I wish that i thought of a line like that." I suggest challenging yourself by using words that you have to look up in order to use them correctly. That way you'll be a better poet. Trust me that's how I leanred


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