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Dancing in the Rain
By Lola7 on 12/20/2011
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Written by Starr  (12/20/2011 2:46:10 PM)

I enjoyed it overall, i would just suggest to re-read lines 4 and 5 and the tenses & flow of that.
the first line of the second stanza had me after that. The hope and peace that were wrapped into that line - tremendous


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Written by Stephen  (12/21/2011 11:01:53 AM)



Written by AusaraMoon  (12/21/2011 12:53:26 PM)

I am able to see the images in your words!

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