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Pretty Girl Lost
By Lola7 on 12/21/2011
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Written by Cervantes  (12/21/2011 2:04:01 PM)

I love the story here. The way you unfold it is beautiful. It is a cliched subject but the details you have used seemed fresh to me. I only give it a four because I feel like the story has been done but the it is somewhat fresh the way you told it to me because the ending is a bit of a surprise to me. Nice pen.

 


Written by adam_green  (12/27/2011 7:48:42 PM)

This one is rather well written and full of meaning and emotion... but still it feels a little like prose though...

I think the ending is great!


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