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If I had Power
By GiselaAndre on 04/30/2015
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if i had power 


Written by pen's  (4/30/2015 11:05:03 PM)

nicely written

 


Written by wordgigolo  (5/21/2015 2:48:17 AM)


 


Written by Autumnsunshine10  (8/31/2015 12:59:26 AM)

Well done...love the positivity!

If I Had Power 


Written by goodtobe58  (5/11/2016 3:02:17 PM)

This is humorous and tells a truth at the same time.

I could not find anything wrong with the rhyming scheme, and the poetic diction is well directed to what the poem is aiming to. A poem for children.

Overall, you did very well here and I like this good try at many levels.

Thanks!

Luis EStable

thanks, Doc 


Written by Unknown Member  (7/20/2016 5:24:53 AM)

prescribed for an ailing world:

read when needed.

If I had Power 

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Written by goodtobe58  (12/21/2016 6:38:21 PM)

Yes, this is so suitable for any child, but the thought is not naive. Any adult would have the same words if he or she had power what they would do. Well, they would say more or less what the child in this poem says if the had the love and mind of a good soul.

This poem delivers is message with sweetness.

Thanks,

Luis A. Estable


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