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By jinstaz* on 06/19/2009
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You Give Me Buttrflies 

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Written by goodtobe58  (12/25/2016 6:12:43 PM)

This is poetry, do not use i for I. It is bad grammar. I know some poets of statue use this form, but it is bad writing. Another thing, be careful when to use its and it`s. You have used its here when you meant to write it`s. Always reread your poems to detect these kinds of mistakes that sometimes are due to carelessness than to anything else.


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