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By anildivya2009 on 07/11/2009
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Written by DesertBoyIan  (7/11/2009 10:15:59 AM)

Very creative ! I like it -

Good! 


Written by Feneverland  (7/29/2009 3:20:45 PM)


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Written by goodtobe58  (12/26/2016 4:13:49 PM)

I don`t know if this poem can be called a good one. First, there is the problem of the obvious here. Second, the argument is badly made. It needs much fixing to come out looking like poetry. There are other things to mention, but this is not the place for a detailed examination of the whole writing.

Thanks

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Written by goodtobe58  (1/5/2017 4:46:34 AM)

This poem is a bit silly for it states the obvious, and it does it not very well.

You tried to create something poetic, but you failed in the try.

There are some spelling and grammatical errors in this , I do not know if I should call it, poem.

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Written by goodtobe58  (7/2/2017 3:15:50 PM)

I think this poem tries to explain the obvious. The said is not necessary. Any child, unless too young to read well, will find this a bit overdone.

I know that this is supposed to be a poem for children, but it does not have to be on the side of lack of intelligence.

I think you made this too simplistic and forget that a child has a mind to read better than this

I want you to read this to yourself and try to hear how it sounds. You will notice that the writing comes out being too trivial for any mind be that mind the mind a child of an adult.
PS
You now can order my book of poems on kindle. It sells for 2.99$.
Just go to amazon.com and type my name Luis A. Estable or the name of the book;"One Hundred Sonnets, Book Two."
I would like you to pass this around, and if you could, leave a review after reading.

Keep working on your children`s verse and the best to you in the trying.

Luis A. Estable


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