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Nightmare
By pielover25 on 09/25/2012
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Written by standrkm  (9/25/2012 8:14:08 PM)

A lot of grammatical errors and everything seems a bit clustered. Nothing really special I haven't heard before. You had a nightmare, you screamed, awoke, and felt scared afterward. You need to be a little more deive and show more emotion to to convey a better sense of fear. Set the tone and leave me shaking in my boots.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:39:28 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:39:57 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:26 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:27 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:28 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:29 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:30 PM)

thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.

 

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:31 PM)

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Written by pielover25  (10/15/2012 8:40:33 PM)

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