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Living on the darker side of things
By pielover25 on 08/18/2011
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Written by Emalie  (9/17/2011 9:56:28 PM)

I really like this, how I could almost imagine how the difference feels.


Written by (*Made_of_Rain_and_Tears*)  (9/19/2011 6:00:09 PM)

I'd suggest going back over the poem and checking grammar and what not, but otherwise, lovely.


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Written by pielover25  (10/12/2011 9:56:31 PM)

thank you both for the reviews :]


Written by Emalie  (10/13/2011 1:11:16 AM)

your welcome. and I forgot to rate it the last time! oops. :S haha I'm crazy...


Written by Karasaj2  (10/13/2011 8:05:55 PM)

This is decent, but it doesn't really flow. The entire thing is based upon the last words and leading up to that it isn't as powerful as it could be- keep trying though


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Written by pielover25  (11/17/2011 6:44:41 PM)

thanks for the reviews:]

Hope this is constructive for you? 

Written by Andydon  (12/10/2011 9:22:50 PM)

If you describe the nightmares and what is taking hold of you, the poem would be much stronger, also try to win the day, it can allow more imagination.
I liked the poem though.

thanks for reviewing 

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Written by pielover25  (12/14/2011 6:23:08 PM)

iam glad you liked my poem ,i might do some editing on it later or i might add on to this poem ,iam not sure yet. thanks for revewing though.


Written by deadmanseeking  (9/9/2016 12:55:49 AM)

And I can believe it. There`s a rough, uncut gem here. thx

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