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Impaired
By JasmineW on 04/27/2012
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Written by flanders  (4/27/2012 3:35:57 AM)

i can see you are going to like it here
on moontown cafe,
good poetry thanks for the read.

flanders.

 


Written by Tsmiles  (4/27/2012 4:40:19 AM)

This was a really good poem. It was a smooth read, with some good metaphors about life. Only mistake I saw was on stanza 2 line 2. "your in dismay" should be you're in dismay.

impaired 


Written by quill59  (4/27/2012 7:23:59 AM)

excellent poem great poetry great meaning

impaired 

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Written by quill59  (4/27/2012 7:25:41 AM)

excellent poem great poetry great meaning

impaired 

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Written by quill59  (4/27/2012 7:26:15 AM)

excellent poem great poetry great meaning

impaired 

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Written by quill59  (4/27/2012 7:26:35 AM)

excellent poem great poetry great meaning

impaired 

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Written by quill59  (4/27/2012 7:27:04 AM)

excellent poem great poetry great meaning


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