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Words from the mind of an opened eyed human.
By Basics on 08/04/2012
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Written by Seth  (8/5/2012 11:14:03 AM)

This is really good. I completely agree with what you're saying. Here's my advice: A.most every place you said "then" ywhen you meant "than" Then vs Than confuses alot of people, for some reason. Than refers to a comparison... Then is a point in time. Also you said threw a few times where you meant "through".

These small points aside, this is really good.

Keep it up!


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