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Be Proud
By tierrad on 11/23/2013
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be proud 


Written by quill  (11/24/2013 1:35:44 AM)

very good poem very good point

 


Written by Cadence.Eastlesswater  (1/19/2014 4:52:20 AM)

I think the message behind the poem is inspiring, however the dynamics of it are somewhat lacking in skill.
The rhythm and flow of words is the most prevalent issue. Each line seems to have an awkward amount of syllables compared to the last. Also, it seems that to find a rhyme, you will interrupt the current idea with something that goes with the theme, but is out of place, like "The cheese is so gooey and stringy. It is wonderful with the pepperoni. PIZZA IS GREAT. The olives are glorious."


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