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Red
By tmedders on 11/16/2013
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RED 


Written by quill  (11/16/2013 11:35:12 AM)


 


Written by Unknown Member  (10/14/2014 11:05:25 PM)

I really enjoyed this, I liked the format and the concept of the message being sent. Although, in the second line breath should be breathe. And just a thought, in the 3rd and 4th stanzas you repeated no longer a few times, and maybe you should choose a different word choice in one of the lines, maybe?

I really liked the imagery in the line, "beneath the moons waxing figure"


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