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Zero and Eleven
By Blanchegdl on 04/09/2014
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Written by Nathan  (4/10/2014 12:01:41 PM)

Nice, I like it.
Especially the ending, flowed. Cool

 

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Written by shawnsteinig  (1/3/2017 6:45:43 PM)

"Go mad, and sane, insane" is a great line. I also love how you both started and ended the poem with phrases in parentheses, that's unique. I'd maybe change a couple word choices so it doesn't sound as cliche but I really like this overall.


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