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The Schism
By mreli on 08/29/2017
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Written by JdSchooley  (9/2/2017 3:12:58 PM)

Pretty heavy stuff... it takes a couple time to get the meaning, but it's well done, thanks.........Jd

 

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Written by mreli  (9/3/2017 3:06:51 PM)

Thank you for reading and writing, always appreciated. The creation/consciousness story is quite the dense subject haha, thanks!

:) 


Written by semi_psychiatrist  (9/10/2017 1:31:33 PM)

I just reviewed What if I Told You, and this soo much cleaner. I get why your line breaking after each segment of deion in a sentence since with headier words and themes you may want to slow it down but maybe it could be broken into a couple of stanzas.

I don't know, either way its got some really provocative ideas that are totally worth the rating.

 

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Written by mreli  (9/21/2017 11:44:42 AM)

Semi_psychiatrist: Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate both your inputs. I'm sure both could be revised but I'm glad it resonated with someone else. I enjoy your review and constructive criticism. Thank you again! :)


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