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Faces in the Mountain
By Ternic73 on 06/14/2017
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Written by deadmanseeking  (6/14/2017 6:45:49 PM)

A kaleidoscope of disjointed images. thx.

 

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Written by Ternic73  (6/14/2017 8:51:48 PM)

thank you I hope you liked.

Faces in the Moutain 

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Written by goodtobe58  (6/25/2017 2:48:36 PM)


Faces in the Moutain 


Written by goodtobe58  (6/25/2017 2:57:24 PM)

This is a nature poem. We can see this in many places in the poem. But what are those faces in the mountain? I do not get that part.

The poem never tries to explain what those faces are, so it`s up to the reader to fill that part in.

The diction is not complicated, but the story does not go to the point that we can call this poem a success though there are one or two poetic lines in this try.

I like the effort you put to write this.

PS
Please, you can now order my book of poems on kindle. It sells for 2.99$.
Just go to amamzon.com and type my name Luis A. Estable or the name of the book; "One HUndred Sonnets, Book Two."

I would like you to pass the word around, and if you could, after reading leave a review of it.

Thanks,

Luis Estable

 


Written by mreli  (9/24/2017 9:25:02 AM)

I love the imagery and rhyme scheme in this, well done! There is much to reflect on with mother earth. Keep writing!


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