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Whispers of a Lover's Heart
By shilohwheeler on 12/30/2009
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Written by Ternic73  (10/17/2015 2:23:41 PM)

Nicely done I like this poem

Whispers of a Lover`s Heart 


Written by goodtobe58  (7/11/2017 3:33:54 PM)

I see here some stanzas that are well-made and others that need some work. For intance, the first one could be made better. The lines are not in agreement so they do not make this a good stanza

There are some that are poetic. The one that closes the poem, I think, is the best atanza of this try, and for that reason makes the poem read not bad, and regarless of its faulty start, the poem come to be in some ways a good one.
For a poem to be good, it does not have to be perfect. There is no perfect poetry in the pen of the human mind. Great poetry is not perfect poetry. a poem, even if great,can aways recieves improvements, but this can`t go on forever for the sake of time and sanity.

You have done what you were capable of doing and this is what I read when I go through this poem.
PS
You can now order my book on kindle. It sells for 2.99$
Go to Amozon.com and type my name Luis A. Estable or the name of the book; "One HUndred Sonnets, Book Two."
By the way, I like you to pass the word and if you could; leave a review after reading the book.

Thank you much and keep on wriitng.

Luis a. Estable


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