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why can't I forget
By westcoastmama on 04/21/2006
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Written by duchess  (4/21/2006 6:49:53 PM)

remember thiiisss

is fabulous. i feel you, girl.


Just one person 

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Written by mjreynolds  (4/22/2006 5:43:09 AM)

of MANY in your life.... think of the good ones that are still here for you... and smile dammit, like in the photo...


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Written by westcoastmama  (4/22/2006 11:31:24 PM)

thanks, Ducks. We ought to get together and talk over a few margarita's :-)

Mike...yeah, well, I know. And, I do smile, dammit!! I always do. Poets are good at hiding pain. I just pretend it's not there and laugh like an idiot and, before I know it, I'm alright. lol...besides, I'm too much of a goofball to let anything get me down too long. *sigh* It's just that, well, once in a while....you know. *hugs* to you both!


The past 

Written by Tawmn  (4/25/2006 7:19:07 PM)

is a photograph. It need not be a mirror.

Nice poem!


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Written by westcoastmama  (4/25/2006 8:15:36 PM)

Thank you, sir, for the stars and the kind words. btw, I like your profile pic.


Written by rachelle1165  (12/16/2007 9:35:23 PM)

just love the images and metaphors...do you have a book or two out already???

Thank you, Rachelle. 

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Written by westcoastmama  (12/18/2007 11:50:35 PM)

No, the books aren't out yet, but I'm still working on them. Life has a funny way of kicking you in the teeth and I'm just now starting to get back into my projects. Soon, I hope. :) Thanks again. ~mary


Written by Itsuwari  (3/5/2008 3:47:44 PM)

It sounds good, I think it needs a little revision, but that is only my opinion.

Hi Ryan 

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Written by westcoastmama  (3/6/2008 4:45:06 PM)

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment...now...if you please, can you elaborate? I'd like to know where your opinion came from to better understand HOW it should be revised.

Thanks again,



Written by Deserada  (3/26/2008 9:25:57 PM)

gave me chills!

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