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another trip around the sun / oh my / january
By ms finch on 01/01/2008
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Written by writerpeach  (1/1/2008 4:03:19 PM)

this is definitly two poems in one, the first half about you and the second half about him. If you break them up into two poems and fill in the gaps i think this would be great

hello / this is not a poem 

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Written by ms finch  (1/1/2008 7:27:42 PM)

it's a journal entry / /

thank you for your comments

I can't remember... 

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Written by ChelseaLou  (1/3/2008 5:05:09 PM)

where I read it, or who said it, but you made me think of a line from something that clearly stuck with me enough for me to pull it out of my hat now:

"...they are creatures in search of a proportion in life, a pattern of grace. It is balance and beauty that people want, not triumph."

I've been thinking about that idea a lot this week. Thanks for sharing this entry, Jenn. I needed it.

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Written by Unmanifested_One  (3/1/2008 12:50:41 PM)

Really kept me on the edge of my seat. You took me on a beautifully illustrated story of love and loving. I really love your style, it's not something you would expect to see while reading poetry, and I like that very much!

Always good 

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Written by Swananowhere  (10/23/2008 12:02:52 PM)

You are a really great writer. I like your stuff!

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