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I Love the Tollbooth Girl
By Jon von Nottingham on 01/17/2006
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Restraining order? 

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Written by mjreynolds  (1/17/2006 11:45:18 PM)

Yeah, I get lots of 'em.....
from editors.

true love 

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Written by dfresh  (1/18/2006 7:13:28 AM)

Jon, this has the potential to be a beautiful love story if you can only get her to put down the mace and listen to you, especially if you can abduct her and carry her off for a few months, so she will learn to associate you with food, and therefore come to care for you. Trust me, it works!

wish i was 


Written by duchess  (1/18/2006 11:05:24 AM)

a tollbooth girl. :)

keep reaching for that dream ducky 

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Written by Jon von Nottingham  (1/23/2006 6:08:08 PM)

and you too can be employed by the state transportation department! Good luck! ;)

Love this 

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Written by Cooper MacCormack  (1/25/2006 5:24:30 PM)

Although she wasn't a toolbooth girl I've "been there,done that." Oh yea, there was no restraining order either but that line caught me off guard and made me laugh. Thanks. ( I suggest you change gold to golden)

LOL 


Written by westcoastmama  (1/26/2006 1:43:16 PM)

Jon! I love this. The ending is so unexpected, you silly man, you....;-) ~Mary

Just checkin in 

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Written by lilyluna22  (1/26/2006 4:43:53 PM)

heya stranger, I dont have time to review the poem, just wanted to say hi. I miss this place.

Kristi

 

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Written by Maria  (1/28/2006 11:29:55 AM)

HA! Ahh that's funny :).

:-) :-) :-) 

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Written by Platypus  (2/1/2006 5:06:45 AM)

giggle giggle

definititely -- you loved her with Gold (not golden )

-- drive past my toll booth if that's what you pay in

:-)

& dam me -- for a change i would add a NOT

Once, we made eye contact
but not so much anymore...

NOT since the restraining ... order.

Card Carrying Member.... 

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Written by jch_dark  (2/1/2006 10:07:04 PM)

Of public transit until I can get a new car.....here is .50 cents make a U-Turn for me....lol


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