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Four to Midnight
By luizsyphre on 03/10/2017
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Written by deadmanseeking  (3/12/2017 11:18:33 PM)

Faithlessness is for sissies. It takes guts to choose life. That`s because of the last stanza. The rest was AWESOME! Hang in there dude. There`s a pony under all that crap. That`s what the tell me. I found mine with my grand kids. All I had to do was not quit before the miricle.


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Written by luizsyphre  (3/19/2017 12:17:27 AM)

Thank you for your concern, but I wasn't really cutting my wrist when I wrote this. Yes, I was a little down, I think about how I've fucked up, but I wasn't going to kill myself....the writing was just part of the "art" and to be honest, my mission was accomplished by creating those feelings in you...it was my aim...thank you, I am working on my "4" to midnight...


Written by mreli  (5/19/2017 9:40:40 AM)

Great job with this! Very open and honest, can definitely relate. Love the rhyme scheme as well too, could make a great song. Thanks!

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