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sunshine
By haileyhails on 01/20/2010
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Written by Robert  (1/21/2010 11:18:01 AM)

Nice poem. Many who read it will wish that they could be 17 again.
You are still so young, keep on loving life and make it a good one.

 


Written by PollutedPoet  (2/28/2010 7:09:52 PM)

a great message, and well put... but it may come off a bit too repetitive.. the first three verses were similiar in meaning in as well. Repetition is good to emphasize a point. So the repeated verse at the end did the trick. but I like !!!

sunshine 


Written by wbb1950  (1/13/2011 5:59:08 PM)

Linda..really good, thanks i was alittle down, it cheered me up.

Amazing 


Written by Intermission  (2/16/2011 1:37:26 AM)

I have no words... this is amazing


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