Your grammar is followable. I don`t have to guess where the punctuation goes. I stumbled onto this site in 2012 and started journalling surrealistic impressionism versions of my life and poetry about whatever. I`m finishing up my 14th page and have had over 18,000 hits in the 5 year since. Write on! There`s no money in it yet, but it`s a heck of a ride. thx.